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Morning Mirror by ~lidy144:iconlidy144:



Look into the mirror and what do I see?
An unfamiliar face stares back at me
Nerves strung out like on Apollo's lyre
When did I start looking so tired?
My hair got a little longer
Do I look a little less stronger?
Being inside is making me so pale
I think I'm looking a little frail
When I look into a mirror this time
My tired face reflects my tired mind
©2008-2009 ~lidy144
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Author's Comments

This is based on an actual experience. One day last winter I went to the mirror in the morning and looked at my self and went, "Woah!" I hadn't noticed how tired I had been looking. I don't want that to happen this year to.

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:iconmegavelraptor:
Dang, I know what'choo mean girl...And you're really great at poetry that can touch into people's feelings by expressing your own, that shows great perception!

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"Seek Knowledge For Knowledge Will Not Seek You."
:iconlidy144:
Really? Thank you so much! ^_^

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"We're just living so that we can die laughing." - Sha Gojyo from Gensomaden Sayuki
~ShortStackStories *Writers-Workshop

"My blood runs cold
My memory has just been sold
My angel is the centerfold"
- "Centerfold" - J Guils Band
:iconmegavelraptor:
Very much so. :D

You are very welcome, m'dear.;)


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"We Be To Raptor, What Combo Be To Locker!" ~MegaVelRaptor~

"Seek Knowledge For Knowledge Will Not Seek You."
:iconheartbubbles:
i swear our stupid school is hell-bent on ruining our beauty :(

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Of course I can be in the carpool lane there's a body in the trunk :XD:
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:iconlidy144:
lamo. XD That wasn't what I was thinking of when I wrote this but its true. The makeup industry and public high schools must be in cohoots. ;)

--
"We're just living so that we can die laughing." - Sha Gojyo from Gensomaden Sayuki
~ShortStackStories *Writers-Workshop

"My blood runs cold
My memory has just been sold
My angel is the centerfold"
- "Centerfold" - J Guils Band
:iconheartbubbles:
hellz yes

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Of course I can be in the carpool lane there's a body in the trunk :XD:
If you belive that same sex marriges should be legal copy and paste this in your signature
I believe in Jesus Christ my Saviour. If you do too, copy and paste this into your signatu

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